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Wednesday, February 19, 2020

creater of the world

Creator of the world
The old man was wearing black shiny glasses. making something new he turned on a little
tiny robot.He moved left and right grabbing new things and scanning them. he knocked a
lamp on to a red button causing. gravity to stop the world started cracking smash bang
gadget fell from everywhere. The man ran to put on scuba diving gear and floated off on
a little island. a meteorite hit him right in the face that must have hurt falling in space.
he hit an planet oof that hurt falling into blackhole
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2020 at 2:51 PM

    Hello Olivia. Great story but its gone off the page. Could you edit the story and put the writing back on the page?

    ReplyDelete
  2. AnonymousMarch 4, 2020 at 2:41 PM

    yes

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