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Tuesday, February 18, 2020

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2 comments:

  1. Yo Olivia great job I relly like the part when his nerve system brakes
    Next time you could make the words bigger It makes me think of when I went to the Hospital for dieabetes

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    1. willow sorry if im being harsh but you spelt really wrong you spell it really not relly i will work on the size of my work any ways thanks for commenting on my blog

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