Yo Olivia great job I relly like the part when his nerve system brakes Next time you could make the words bigger It makes me think of when I went to the Hospital for dieabetes
willow sorry if im being harsh but you spelt really wrong you spell it really not relly i will work on the size of my work any ways thanks for commenting on my blog
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Yo Olivia great job I relly like the part when his nerve system brakes
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willow sorry if im being harsh but you spelt really wrong you spell it really not relly i will work on the size of my work any ways thanks for commenting on my blog
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